DS is the one with whom I share just a passion for sport. We talk a lot on cricket, we both don’t like the IPL, he knows a lot of soccer (though he gets stuck in time at times). I’d asked him for a guest post here long back, but he kept postponing since I don’t write sport on my blog. Two days back, he just shared 4 lines of Hindi poetry with me, and asked to put it on my Hindi poetry blog. I think I’d rather put it here. It’s short, but very beautiful, and today, I really do feel that verse. I also translate it for general benefit.
मैं चलता जा रहा था,
आगे बढता जा रहा था,
पर मैंने ये भी नहीं देखा,
मैं अकेला होता जा रहा था|

I was walking on,
Moving forward quickly;
But I never did notice,
With every step I became -
Alone.
(June 4th, 2012)
(Image: Walking Alone, by SilentIvy on DeviantArt.)

Firstly take a slap from me DS for not writing poetry before DESPITE my regular badgering.
these 4 lines have stuck in my head DS. i love it, no questions asked
and secondly… this is so simply said but it is so so beautiful
Ouch! That hurt ns!! This just came out of nowhere. I had no intention to write or think of any poem. My mind just randomly flashed these 4 lines…
Hi
I am not much of a poetry person and for Hindi poems I usually depend on the translation . This one I could follow without that and it’s a very beautiful one
Thanks Jaish! Means a lot to me if I could get the message across to someone who is not a poetry person.
wow–that last word hit like the snap of rubberband! exquisite!
Thank you, Bhavana
It was a literal translation of my friend’s poem.
- Leo.
…absolutely wonderful!
Thanks Amit.
Thanks so much Leo for publishing this on your main blog. Its really an honor for me to get published on your blog. And what a beautiful translation you have provided, its just perfect.
Welcome, DS. A pleasure to have your poem at my blog
- Leo.
B’ful lines Leo ….
TTT, I only translated, the words and poet behind it is DS.
- Leo.
Brilliant piece of work, DS. You should do more poetry.
Thanks TF. I will try but I really am not a poet!!!
You tell him TF!! he doesnt listen to me!! *pouts*
Drama Girl!!!
DS….DS…! You REALLY need to start writing more poetry and post them (not that we haven’t told you that enough
) This is SO good.
I will try writing poems Antara. I have never sat down with the intention of writing one, so maybe some effort is needed on my part! And Thanks for your constant encouragement!!
Such a stunning short poem!
Begin reading poetry and criticism about poetry. Gradually, poems will flow because you are talented.
I have passed on your message to DS, Rita
Thanks!
- Leo.
simple and simply beautiful..!!
DS u shud give a try to poetry
So many have told him too, but he never listens, Swati
- Leo.
@Leo – may be he is waiting for a inspiration… wen inspiration will come and tell him to write then he will listen and follow…
Will try, Swati
- Leo.