अकेला

DS is the one with whom I share just a passion for sport. We talk a lot on cricket, we both don’t like the IPL, he knows a lot of soccer (though he gets stuck in time at times). I’d asked him for a guest post here long back, but he kept postponing since I don’t write sport on my blog. Two days back, he just shared 4 lines of Hindi poetry with me, and asked to put it on my Hindi poetry blog. I think I’d rather put it here. It’s short, but very beautiful, and today, I really do feel that verse. I also translate it for general benefit.


मैं चलता जा रहा था,
आगे बढता जा रहा था,
पर मैंने ये भी नहीं देखा,
मैं अकेला होता जा रहा था|

I was walking on,
Moving forward quickly;
But I never did notice,
With every step I became -
Alone.


(June 4th, 2012)
(Image: Walking Alone, by SilentIvy on DeviantArt.)

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24 thoughts on “अकेला

  1. kirti

    Firstly take a slap from me DS for not writing poetry before DESPITE my regular badgering.
    and secondly… this is so simply said but it is so so beautiful :) these 4 lines have stuck in my head DS. i love it, no questions asked :)

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  2. jaishvats

    Hi
    I am not much of a poetry person and for Hindi poems I usually depend on the translation . This one I could follow without that and it’s a very beautiful one :)

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  3. DS

    Thanks so much Leo for publishing this on your main blog. Its really an honor for me to get published on your blog. And what a beautiful translation you have provided, its just perfect.

    Reply
    1. DS

      I will try writing poems Antara. I have never sat down with the intention of writing one, so maybe some effort is needed on my part! And Thanks for your constant encouragement!!

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